TrifExtra: The Smell of Frito Feet

This week’s Trifextra asks to submit a 33 Word response, but with a tweak. Three extra words MUST be included: REMEMBER, RAIN, & REBELLION.

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Do you remember Xena?

How you loved our walks?

Your rain soaked fur,

and Frito scented feet.

But your insides have staged a rebellion,

fighting an uphill battle

that I fear you may not win.

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24 Responses to TrifExtra: The Smell of Frito Feet

  1. Christine says:

    Oh, this is sad. “Your insides have staged a rebellion” is such a painfully perfect way to describe it. Really nice job.

  2. That would be tough to write, but it was beautifully done.

  3. So heartbreaking, yet beautiful. “Frito scented feet” is wonderful.

  4. barbara says:

    sadly, beautifully done.

    to bring a smile (I hope) I will tell you that as a teen, my oldest daughter’s feet always smelled like fritos. We have no clue why. 🙂

  5. Suzanne says:

    Oh, this is so beautiful and poignant – it makes my heart ache.

  6. “Frito Feet” That’s just great!

  7. Linda Vernon says:

    Vivid combinations of words. Nicely crafted! 😀

  8. mairzeebp says:

    Lovely and a heartache all a the same time. Frito feet are some of the best feet.

  9. Draug419 says:

    This is hearbreaking! But it’s beautiful too and now I want to cry.

  10. Lori Wise says:

    Oh, the loss of fur babies. This will hit home with anyone who’s ever experienced it, and hit hard. I recently lost my baby of 15 years. It’s a sad piece to be sure, but also one of celebration for the wonderful memories you have of her. Beautifully done.

  11. Sini says:

    I wonder what upheaval the furry frito smelly Xena is upto ? Hoping its not dark and painful as it appears.

  12. So sad. That rebellion is a tough one.

  13. rangewriter says:

    The Frito feet had me laughing, then the rebellion inside had me crying. Such a mood swing in so few words. Well done.

  14. atrm61 says:

    Sad that all good things/relations do not last for ever & there always is a shadow of pain & suffering behind every smile.Hope your Xena,does not have to suffer much & may she live forever in your loving hearts.

  15. I’ve heard of other dogs having paws that smell of fritos. Could it be the cornmeal in dogfood? lol I have owned and lost many pets over the years. It is such a betrayal that that cute little pup can grow old on you. You did a good job with the prompt. http://annbennett2.blogspot.com

  16. Sad and so loving. The Frito-scented feet is a perfect description.

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